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Jiří Rybišár - Přežití

hebké je křídlo naší kůže
znehybnění kobrou hodiny

dva stromy něžností

tepeme básně z vilnosti
rezne klíček bolesti

v netopýří noci je  ulice
skrojek nebe  na zemi

stromy javor klen
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editor Czech Republic, on 3/12/2010 10:48:00 AM Said:

editor

tentokrát taková změna k přibližným rýmům Smile velmi pěkné, neuchopitelně jemné a rozřezané do nebe.
prvotní dojem tvoří typické personifikace ve spojení s metonymií na "obecné" úrovni - přibližuje se každému
mám stále pocit, jako když ty obrazy znám...
krásná...

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